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You are correct in saying that there is still traffic on the ocean despite the mists. My intent was the mist is typically out a number of miles, but on certain parts of the land and on certain days (maybe also effected by the weather), it'll draw closer to the coastline. It is possible to sail into the mist and sailors have attempted it, but the mist can get crews lost easily and give nasty sea beasties shadowy cover. Just a few extra ideas for you!
I'll put it on my next update to maybe add a little blurb somewhere about how ocean travel and exploration works, but for now, I think you're good to go!
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The point that I'm not sure about is whether or not his father being an intelligence worker is acceptable
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The only other thing that stood out is that Seian a rather large man for a Human. While you can definitely go beyond the weight and heights defined on the "Human" page, this felt like it tipped the scale a bit. (No pun intended.)
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