Khy'eras

I'm doing the achievements for aiding the nobles and any others that make sense. Check out a Fell night thread viewtopic.php?f=12&p=2102#p2102

A woman's scream echoes thru the night air of a small abandoned shop. The trade district of Fellsguard was sparsely populated in this area as it was right next to the slums. Some called it doom street since nothing but failed businesses lined it. Recently a series of deadly dog attacks have been fou...

Do these changes work

Just want to make sure it's okay to be one of the first Korcai. Let me know what you think, thanks