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For context, the large island south of the mainland is called Baslehr Ridge, if you want to get specific. The islands just below it (to the southeast-ish) are also part of the Ridge. However, the dotted islands above the Ridge (to the Northwest-ish) that connect to the mainland are called the Preldova Narrows. It's not necessary for you to include those names (maybe Shesurus doesn't know what places are called), but I wanted to let you know since the Narrows aren't on the map yet.
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No one was ever specifically sent to kill Victoria. Bhelest left her alone after she became Korcai - even while she hunted him - because he knew she would create a bunch of bloodthirsty minions that would kill other people in Khy'eras. However, you could say that Horus was once a guard or assassin for Bhelest and while not sent to kill Victoria, he got caught in the cross-fire during one of her attempts and was turned that way. Just an idea.
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As a side note, I did laugh a bit at this :
Torso / Chest: Underwhelming and not distracting.